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（吉林）回顾三年的初中生活，父母的教诲与支持始终伴你成长，使你进步。那些发生在你
与父母之间的故事，看似平淡却值得回味与珍藏。请以“The Story of My Progress”为题，
写一篇文章。
要求：1.讲述一件发生在你与父母之间的事情，可适度发挥。
2.词数 80 字左右，文中不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称。
The Story of My Progress
万能模板套用分析
首先，引出话题，点明写作目的。
其次，叙述具体的故事。
最后，再次点明主题。满分范文
The Story of My Progress
I cant make any progress without my parents help.①I remember clearly when I
didnt pass an exam and made my parents disappointed, I felt so sorry and sad and
even did not want to go home.(句式多变原则，when 引导时间状语从句，从句和主句中
and 分别连接两个谓语）My parents found me at school and tried to comfort me.They
told me that one time of failure did not determine my whole life and what I should do
was to overcome every difficulty and try to get a higher score in the next exam. I was
touched and made up my mind（短语优先原则）to study even harder.②
It is my parents that help me make great progress.③
你也可以这样表达
①I must say that my progress has connected with my parents closely.
②Hearing what they said,I decided to try my best and study even harder.
③Thanks to my parents,I have made great progress.
范文译文
我进步的故事
没有父母的帮助，我不能取得任何进步。
我记得很清楚，当我考试不及格，让父母失望的时候，我觉得非常抱歉又难过，甚至不想回
家。爸爸妈妈在学校里找到了我，并尽力安慰我。他们告诉我，一次失败并不能决定我的整
个人生。我应该做的就是克服每一个困难，努力在下次考试中取得更高的分数。我觉得很感
动，下决心要更加努力学习。
正是我父母帮助我取得了那么大的进步。
热点话题满分叙事记叙文必背
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根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。
所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语: self-disciplined(自律的)，plan，goal，habit，improve
提示问题: What did you do to be self-disciplined?
What benefits have you got from doing so?
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，用英语写一篇短文给某网站投稿，谈谈为了增强自律
意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。根据题目中给出的问题可知，短文应包括
以下内容：首先谈一谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么？然后谈谈这样做给你带来的好处。
第一个内容应主要使用一般过去时；第二个内容应主要使用现在完成时。注意谓语动词的正
确形式。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理地想
象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。写作时应注
意：首先注意内容的完整、充实，学生们可以结合自己的实际生活，写一写自己平时的做法。
注意叙述应有层次、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，
因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰
成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结
构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is
self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on
time at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well
with my clas *** ates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I
usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing
all the task, I developed the habit of going to bed early and going to bed early. In the
society，I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.
In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had man
good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my
study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly,
being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future,
I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了自己第自律的认识，结合自己的
实际谈论了自律的好处。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，短文主要分两段：
第一段中作者介绍了自己在家里、在学校以及在社会上是如何遵守规则，进行自我约束的。
这一段的内容叙述很有条理，从at school, At home, In the society三个方面进行介绍。第二段中作者主要阐述了自律给自己带来的好处，使用了Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly，从三个方面进行介绍。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范，句式结构文章，且使用了较高级的词汇和复杂句式，提升了作文档次，展现了作者扎实的写作功底。文章中较好的句型有：I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school.、I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal.、
First of all，I have had many good habits，which makes my life easier and more regular.、Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future.等。
（二）
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”
的活动，他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）
曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。
要求：
(1) 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80~100。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Milk,
Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an
ecological eitizen(生态公民), we did a good job. Last
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Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one
day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连
篇，严重跑题。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To
be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, I went to our community
with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our
environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike
instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should
take bags to go shopping. And they also knew to put litter in different bins. Finally,
we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together.
We were tired but happy that day.
Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested
in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，
cut down， go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
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